Title: The Lady and the Highwayman
Author: Sarah M. Eden
Series: Proper Romance #2
Publisher: Shadow Mountain
Release Date: September 3, 2019
Book Source: NetGalley
“Elizabeth Black is the headmistress of a girls school in 1865s Victorian London. She is also a well-respected author of silver-fork novels, stories written both for and about the upper-class ladies of Victorian society. But by night, she writes very different kinds of stories–the Penny Dreadfuls that are all the rage among the working-class men. Under the pseudonym Charles King, Elizabeth has written about dashing heroes fighting supernatural threats, intelligent detectives solving grisly murders, and dangerous outlaws romancing helpless women. They contain all the adventure and mystery that her real life lacks.
Fletcher Walker began life as a street urchin, but is now the most successful author in the Penny Dreadful market, that is until Charles King started taking all of his readers. No one knows who King is, including Fletcher s fellow members of the Dread Penny Society, a fraternity of authors dedicated to secretly fighting for the social and political causes of their working-class readers. The group knows King could be an asset with his obvious monetary success, or he could be the group’s undoing as King s readership continues to cut into their profits.
Determined to find the elusive Mr. King, Fletcher approaches Miss Black. As a fellow-author, she is well-known among the high-class writers; perhaps she could be persuaded to make some inquiries as to Mr. King’s whereabouts? Elizabeth agrees to help Fletcher, if only to insure her secret identity is never discovered. What neither author anticipated was the instant attraction, even though their social positions dictate the impossibility of a relationship.
For the first time Elizabeth experiences the thrill of a cat-and-mouse adventure reminiscent of one of her own novels as she tries to throw Fletcher off her scent. But the more time they spend together, the more she loses her heart. Its upper-class against working-class, author against author where readers, reputations, and romance are all on the line.” – Amazon
Le sigh. I really enjoyed this book. And now you can feel the but coming. Sarah Eden just kept repeating over and over how no one can find out that Elizabeth writes Penny Dreadfuls, and about Fletcher’s low station starting off in life. And I don’t mean the casual reminder or even once per chapter. It was often multiples times in a chapter. And some of the chapters that may have been all that was talked about.
The Lady and the Highwayman could have been cut down to 200 pages if Eden didn’t repeat that information over and over. And I would have been happy with a 200 page book. I would have given that novel a five star rating. The rest of the story was very entertaining. And I can’t even say just the novel, because Eden included two Penny Dreadfuls in the book as well. Not only was that a fun idea, but that was the only time I wasn’t reading on repeat about Elizabeth and Fletcher’s predicaments. So I extra enjoyed the Penny Dreadfuls.
The adventure parts in all three of the stories were very entertaining and fast paced. Eden did a wonderful job describing Victorian London, from the conditions of the slums to the upper crust. Eden’s details in regards to the clothing and social norms were very in depth, and most of her characters were very well developed.
But I just can’t get past the repetitiveness. If Eden writes another in the Proper Romance series I may read it, but if she hasn’t changed up her writing style I know I’ll be in for a lot of skimming.
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